The townsfolk wandered around their small town, not knowing of danger that lied among the edge.

The ocean barely went inside of the town, but many of the townsfolk where terrified, the captain, who managed the lookout, kept on reassuring them that the town was safe.

The river that ran along the edge was getting unexpectedly faster, nobody knew what was going on.

They were all told to stay inside their homes for safety as the captain tried to find the source of what caused the river to move so quickly.

Nobody knew what danger happened that day…

Nobody knew.

6 Comments on 100WC

  1. emmac2016
    March 13, 2018 at 11:44 pm (2 months ago)

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  2. libby2016
    March 26, 2018 at 10:34 am (2 months ago)

    Pippa, I love the way you have written this piece. I got a sense of the impending danger, and the fact that the townsfolk were unaware of what was going on. You certainly left me wanting to read more of the story.
    Well Done!

  3. lucy2016
    April 22, 2018 at 11:20 pm (1 month ago)

    I love this 100wc Pippa,
    As soon as I read the first sentence I could tell that the setting of the story was the 20th century. The amount of description in there really gave me an idea of how the characters felt and thought of the situation. Great job

  4. charlotte
    April 22, 2018 at 11:22 pm (1 month ago)

    That is a really interesting piece of writing. It really gives off an air of suspicion that the townsfolk have no idea what the danger is it would be a great start to a story. great job!

  5. hanna2017
    April 22, 2018 at 11:22 pm (1 month ago)

    Hi Pippa
    This story was very interesting, you explained it in a lot of detail and it left me thinking at the end. All the spelling and grammar were correct.
    Hanna – http://hanna2017.global2.vic.edu.au/

  6. zedekai2016
    April 29, 2018 at 11:27 pm (4 weeks ago)

    Nice 100wc. Very mystical!


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