prompt: The Slime Dripped Through…
Goal: To remember punctuation,spelling, capitals. (Italic)
The slime dripped through the small crack in the ceiling. Our house is pretty broken down, some walls even have giant holes in them. We cover them up with paintings.
I hope our cats can’t reach the holes.
I went up to the attic, to see what’s causing the slime to fall through. As the creaky, half-broken floor boards nearly broke under my feet in the attic, I found the part right above my room, where the slime was. I got my torch out and looked behind a couple of things to find my brothers broken slime ball next to the crack. Leaking.
I picked it up and got some wet towels to clean up the mess.
After that, I went and did my day normally. I hope nothing else did the same thing.
Goal: to use more dialogue in my writing.
goal colour: red
thunder echoed through the field, heavy rain fell on the running ants. I scuttled quickly, trying to see my home through my blurry, fuzzy eyes. My home seemed to get further and further away… But i didnt care. When I got near my home, rain flooded the way, I couldn’t get to it. I scuttled the other way, rain flooded that way as well.
I cried “Help!! Please, I’m trapped!!”
A raindrop rolled towards me and stopped in front of me… I scuttled around it a few times, then I slowly walked towards it, it didn’t “pop” like all the others. it stayed.
all the rain.
“yes!! I can finally go home!!” I yelled.
its this picture!
this BTN was about the history of video games and what people thought about them.
many people were excited about “pong”.
“pong” wasn’t the first tennis video game.
“space invaders” inspired many other video game creators.
games would be much more advanced in the future or in the next 40 years.
why would people be excited about pong?
why did space invaders inspire other games?
how would the next generation of game creators create games with all the (possibly) new technology?
I saw the wall…
the wall was so plain…I could decorate it, with paintings or other things. unfortunately I had no paintings or any other things to decorate it with. I thought about my favorite book, Harry Potter and the philosophers stone. maybe this wall was like that wall… but that would be impossible, Harry Potter is just a fictional world, and everyone knows that fictional worlds never come true.
maybe this was different…? maybe this wall is like the platform 9 and 3 quarters wall. I looked around: no people to watch my stupid action, perfect.
I ran to the wall… turns out, I was right. It was like Harry Potter.
((hope the link works))
This video was about a Vietnam person who became a comedian.
Refugees have to spend 5 days at sea.
sometimes they would get attacked by pirates.
there where some massive storms out at sea.
why did they leave Vietnam in the first place?
did they leave Vietnam because of attacks?
if you are not from Australia, but you live there, it does not mean you are not Australian!! all you need to do to be Australian is to feel compassion and feelings towards how you live, we are all Australian here!!
How could something so tiny eat something so big?! this small ant nearly ate a whole bunch of piza. it just scuteld to the counter all like, “mmmmmm! this pizza looks good!!” it then opened the pizza box up and gobbled it all down. it then scuttled down to many other boxes and ate it all! my family and I where so stunned to see a big fat ant next to a bunch of empty pizza boxes. my little brother stated, “what a big fat greedy ant!!!” we all laughed.
Finally our real order of pizza arrived, we ate it all before the ant could.
Prompt: how could something so tiny..?
this video is about how the federation of Australia came together
the poor, smaller countries where asking the big, rich countries for money.
in the end, the 6 countries came together as a whole country.
who decided to make all the colonies become one?
who named the colonies?
my insight is that we may be all living in London/America if Captain Cook didn’t come to Australia.
its on ants blog
Recalls-> dark red
this short 3 min video was about two convicts that wanted to quit.
if you stole some simple things that you need to live, you might have iron chains put around your feet.
it was easy to catch an serious illness back then.
two soldiers wanted to get fired, but they ended up in punishment.
they wanted to get caught because: they thought that being a convict was easier then being a soldiers.
what made them think that being a convict was easier then being a soldier?
BTN 1: The Encounter-
This short video was about Waruwi seeing the “ghost” people and a cow.
Nana thinks that the smoke will keep away the mosquitoes.
Waruwi saw the ghost people, then warned her Nana.
When Waruwi saw the cow, she was confused of what to call it.
ghost people where what Aboriginals called White people.
How could the ghost people not see Waruwi?
why was the boy drumming in front of three men?
was that the first cow Waruwi saw? (seeing as they live in the wild)
BTN 2- First Fleet
This BTN was about the first fleet.
They sailed to AUS in 1770.
The first fleet was hot,humid and full of pests.
there where about 17 children on the First fleet.
Connection to my life: my ancestors came on the first fleet.
why couldn’t they hang all the people?
why did they sail so close to the land?
did they ever try to give medicine to the sick?
People were scared, but I wasn’t! (I was scared at first)